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Post by Attero Dominatus on Jan 18, 2010 3:48:26 GMT -5
I just got done reading Boom Town in Ongoing Stories. It is a good hook that makes you wonder just what it was that Cal G Johnson knew. |
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Post by Floyd Looney on Jan 18, 2010 14:09:08 GMT -5
Dang I just erased my third Boom Town post by accident! ouch.
I'll have to try to rewrite my masterpeice.
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Post by Floyd Looney on Jan 18, 2010 14:29:01 GMT -5
I rewrote the third part. Introducing a character, with a name this time.
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Post by Floyd Looney on Jan 19, 2010 1:14:35 GMT -5
There you go, now you have a named character and you now know something about him too.
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Post by Attero Dominatus on Jan 19, 2010 17:58:19 GMT -5
That was awesome. I really liked the idea of a nation-wide militia movement.
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Post by Floyd Looney on Jan 19, 2010 18:23:21 GMT -5
I got the info about Gilbert AZ from Google Maps. hehe... real locations hehe
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Post by Floyd Looney on Jan 19, 2010 19:22:32 GMT -5
2 more entries added
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Post by Floyd Looney on Jan 22, 2010 19:01:30 GMT -5
I guess I should wait for someone to read it and comment before I continue.
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Post by Aaron Burr on Jan 23, 2010 0:27:12 GMT -5
Hmmm. Some top notch writing Floyd. Are you going to finish this one?
But yeah, it reads just as well as any other....hmmm...political thriller? Action yarn? Or anything else on the book shelves. Whatever it ends up being, make sure you have some skirts in it.
Bang it out and submit it to your agent.
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Post by Attero Dominatus on Jan 25, 2010 8:30:51 GMT -5
Sorry I was gone for the weekend. I just got done reading Boomtown. I think this is your best writing yet. I hope you stick with it.
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Post by Floyd Looney on Jan 25, 2010 8:39:44 GMT -5
Thanks. I think I'll do a few more parts before I go back to Earth Czar and Crashed! I think going back and forth is actually working for me. Strange as that sounds.
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Post by Attero Dominatus on Jan 30, 2010 6:49:36 GMT -5
I just read the new entries in Boom Town. Great stuff. I would suggest putting in some dissent in the NCOs and lower tier officers of the National Guard when the stuff really hits the fan. Things like resignations over being given outwardly illegal orders. Of course, maybe the Covenant was prepared for that in some way, and they have international 'peacekeepers' as a backup plan or something.
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Post by Floyd Looney on Jan 30, 2010 15:01:14 GMT -5
That is a good idea, when it comes around to that. Possibly even a clash between National Guard and Mililtia.
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