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Post by Floyd Looney on Aug 24, 2011 14:35:48 GMT -5
Fan Fiction is mostly insipid, horrible stuff. Recently I was thinking of writing a treatment where Harry Potter was a girl. I had the idea that Severus Snape would not have hated a Sarah Lily Potter because she would remind him of her mother. So he would actually like her and try to help her. Sarah would think the creepy dude might be a perv. lol.
I don't have a copy of the original lying around but I would also switch Ron and Hermoine (sic). In fact the whole Weasley clan would be mostly girls, including the stuffy Prescilla.
It kind of sounds like fun.
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Post by Attero Dominatus on Aug 24, 2011 14:53:26 GMT -5
I do not know a thing about Harry Potter, but I would love to see this.
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Post by Floyd Looney on Aug 24, 2011 15:08:49 GMT -5
I will try not to Americanize it too much. lol
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Post by Attero Dominatus on Aug 24, 2011 19:22:41 GMT -5
lol
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Post by Floyd Looney on Aug 25, 2011 0:20:08 GMT -5
Yep, I might have to cut out a bunch of stuff. Slow start! 9th page before arriving at Diagon Alley, geez
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Post by Floyd Looney on Aug 26, 2011 23:53:10 GMT -5
Well, its a hard slog. I don't even have a copy of the original to copy off of, just memory and wikipedia. I'm going to end up changing a lot of the characters I guess. Here it is up to arriving at Hogwarts. This is tougher than I thought it would be. Attachments:
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Post by Floyd Looney on Aug 31, 2011 13:25:08 GMT -5
I'm kind of stuck there. This seems to be taking too long, it was supposed to be a short version. lol
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Post by Attero Dominatus on Sept 1, 2011 0:47:33 GMT -5
I will read it shortly. I have been busy.
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Post by Attero Dominatus on Sept 1, 2011 2:08:17 GMT -5
Okay, so far, great job with the British dialogue, and great job doing a young girl character. Great start for the story.
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Post by Floyd Looney on Sept 1, 2011 8:33:30 GMT -5
I have to skip a bunch of the crap though, this was supposed to be a short story. lol
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